During my visit with Olivia we briefly went over what my main idea/argument is for the paper. She told me to write out what my argument is as a thesis that is more than just one vague sentence. Once my argument was clear to her, Olivia skimmed over my whole paper to see how I went about connecting Dweck and The Coddling. I told her I always have trouble trying to connect quotes to my argument and she suggested trying to fix the explanations of the Dweck quotes if I can. Other than some minor tweaks in both body paragraphs I have in the first draft, Olivia told me I could add another paragraph if I wanted to. So, for my final draft I want to add in a body paragraph that is specifically about one L&H quote that clearly exemplifies what I disagree with from The Coddling.
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