The most change I see between the first and final draft of paper 3 is focusing in on the ideas I present in each paragraph. By this I mean that I revised to try and give the best explanations of evidence that I could and tried my best to connect the evidence in a way that made sense. In the beginning of the semester I struggled to try and explain why I used a quote, but I feel as though i did really well with that aspect in paper 3 because of the complex ideas I was trying to write about. I needed to make extremely sure that my reasoning was coming across and that the reader would be able to see how I am connecting all the ideas I brought up. Another thing I learned during this semester was to not be afraid of trying to add in another paragraph. That new paragraph after the first draft is where my personal opinion really came out because I could just have a whole paragraph dedicated to it. The new paragraph after the first draft was very important to write not just because it was an even clearer stating of my opinion, but that I used some evidence to try and argue my opinion instead of just trying to connect the different articles.
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